First Fanfic Chapter

I haven't finished the final chapter of Ruse: Case Closed, but since I've been feeling low lately and comments on my fanfics always make me feel good, I am going to post the first chapter at comicfangirls. I hope to get some constructive criticism on this and eventually the whole fic before I post it on Fanfiction.net. Please read and enjoy.

If you're not a member of the community I posted to you can still read it, but you can't leave comments, so please leave them here.